QUEST FOR GENUINE HAPPINESS || Slam Dunk Fanfiction - Reviews

Want more more please can’t wait for the next bumping round that is coming. I feel sorry for the life that Camila and Ronan and baby Katya had to deal with.

I really love this book.

A lot of faces-lapping, easy money making and a tons of sexist moments.I'm personally not a fan of modern day harem set up specially with the MCs playboy personality. The author's story development and the system arc were the saving grace of this novel for me. And the added bonus of fast update and great translation make it a worth while read.

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For those wondering I've read to 500 Chps in raws.It's a good story though it does have flaws. But first I strongly recommend you read the other Teacher/Senior Brother Novels first. Like {Master Of Untold Daos}It's really cool seeing him transmigrated into an old body, instead of facing Young Masters, he fights Old Foggies.It's extremely slow progress, we don't get into pills till the 350s. The first arc we find out MC old body regaining his youth back but it stops there. It's just gets very contradictory since the System becomes nonexistence. He's trying to break-through when it's unnecessary [He has the System for that after all.]It's get even weirder when it's mentioned "Will you let your country get trampled by a foreign race?". Which I find pretty stupid because they clearly didn't give a fudge in the beginning and let the world become chaotic. [Yes this novel gets into politics, a royal family which is pretty dam annoying since they're the antagonist/main-subject for over 200 chapters!]This is why I think the Author has his priorities wrong. It no longer feels like a Cultivation novel. I didn't mind the mesh of Wuxia elements at first, it's fine to temper yourself in the mortal world. (Every CN has a mortal arc at least once but this is too much!)The thing that bothers me the most is that even after 500 Chapters, The Author hasn't given anything to the Characters! Just a weapon. That's why I say the System becomes nonexistent. It makes me really sad and have mix feelings about this story.. I don't know what I should expect from this story anymore.

i liked this novel alot. nowadays there are not many authors who write ruthless and cold MC's. everyone is trying to create a hero or a heaven's favorite. personally i like aloof, cold and decisive MC's much more. his innate abilities and powers are also interesting. the world building is like any other cultivation world where there are rankings of sects, kingdoms and also even higher level of powerful beings than normal people knows. the only thing i dont like is the huge fillers everywhere. even if two people are talking, you will find two three paragraphs of fillers/explanations  for every sentence they speak. alot of filler in between conversations. in full whole chapters two persons will only speak two lines while anything else will be filler explanation. ?u200d♂️. thats why 4.8....for writing its 4 for everything else its 5 stars.

Raw name: 我的身体有bugStatus: 1200 Chapters (Completed)As usual, webnovel summary doesn't do justice to novel. When I first read summary, I almost skipped it due to feeling like fan-fics. Its about a person who somehow gets a bug and breaks balance of game system.Novel is good. Only that when the novel is starting its very abrupt. The novel just starts without giving info who the MC is or where the MC is or  MC is bugged or not. Reading about ~10 Chapters you will get the sense of story.

Basically a ripoff of “Beginning after the end” some of the lines are the same he hes a black dragon he wore a mask when he was an adventurer and other stuff.

The story is quite interesting. the character is not useless to remain traumatized due to his ability but to use it correctly in a separate way.Now I can only say that they should read the novel, it is quite interesting.

It's really an interesting, it has a good starting point, the plot feels ok, I only would like more chapters, but feels it's been intresting until now.

Writing Quality: 3/5 Average or readable enough, it lacks a bit of editing especially in the first chapters where the "i" is not capitalizedexample: "Where i am? is this a dream? 'Someone kidnapped me? No, there is no reason to throw me here then. Do i sleepwalked? No, i can't reach that far just by sleepwalking.'Stability of Updates: 2/5 UPDATE MORE! Like seriously it needs a daily update.Story Development: 4/5 I won't say it's the best but where can you find something so unique as a Slice of life wuxia? Where the main character is neither the antagonist or someone special more like a bystander type of character.Character Design: 3/5 Too be honest the only thing this story lacks is characters hopefully there will be romance in this since it can get boring really fast without any stimulation regarding relationships.World Background: 3/5 Average enough but not bad.Total score: 3/5Highly recommended even if my rating is a bit low, the plot is interesting, the writing even though not edited can be readable enough.In the later chapters, it seems to be fixed still you should edit the first few chapters with editing tools like Grammarly.

Yes I am reviewing my own story.I began to write this series because I was interested in series like Konosuba. I asked myself "What would YOU want out of an isekai series?" and so I decided to write my own.This story is designed to poke fun at the general idea of isekai wish fulfillment series while also being its own story. I don't want to sound egotistical, but from what others have told me the writing is funny and consistently well done, the characters are memorable and enjoyable, and the world is well built. I don't ask that you make this your favorite story, but I do recommend that you at least give this a try.